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The great beauty of Poetry is, that it makes every thing every place interesting - '
John Keats

Monday 12 December 2011

A STORY OF TRUE LOVE :(


Well this is a poem by me on one of the worst and one of the best feeling of the world that atleast once comes to each and every person.Yes am talking about love.But here my poem is not exactly upon love.it is about that pain,it is about that patience a person can have,It is about something about that inner feeling that makes you feel something.


I have mentioned about how a person waits for his beloved ...
How a person just crave for his beloved?
How does he feels for her?


But result is she has no feelings..He tries but that day does not come when she also could have some feelings.And when finally she comes to tell him then she was too late.


Thus the poem is too much about separation ,love and dedication of a person to his beloved.


Have you ever heard a story of this kind?


Once there was a girl,she used to wear a burkha.She was as beautiful as morning sunshine.Her eyes were like deep lake .As she used to wear only burkha so her eyes were only visible.Once a person started loving her just by seeing the priceless.heavnly beauty of her black eyes.The boy used to propose her daily when she used to get out in the market.


One fine day the boy told her that if she would not accept his proposal then he would give his life on 3rd day in center of the market.


1day passed -girl thought he is good.
2day passed -girl felt her love and thought would go on 3rd day.
The boy waited for her 2 days and 3rd day came
3rd day-the girl ran in the market to accept his love but there was pin drop silence.
The girl saw the boy lying in the center of the market with clothes wrapped around him.
The girl shouted at top of her voice.There was pain in her voice,she ran towards the boy ,she tried to hold him,she tried to kiss him,she said"NO DON'T LEAVE ME ALONE PLEASE YOU CANT DIE.......I LOVE YOU "was what she said..and she started wailing.It felt as if sun was going to shine on a sunny morning and all of a sudden clouds of darkness, pain and tears surrounded it.
The boy had waited for her but she never came and so he gave  his life by tearing his heart....




              "Waiting for you"



Someday I would leave this world,
Someday I would lay under the earth,
Someday  I would not be alive any more,
Someday I would have to close the door,
someday I would have to end the show


But before that,
I want you to see me,feel me,
pray for me,crave for me,live for me,




and one day would see you calling me.
That day you would be craving for me,
that day you would be praying for me,
that day you would be calling for me,
that day you would come near to me.


The same face that I wanted with me,
to feel me,pray for me,crave for me,live for me


And I would be laughing at me.
heart would be pumping high,
smiles would be smiling shy,
As you would come near by.


My ears would try to listen to you,
My hands would try to move towards you,
My eyes would try to stare at you,
My lips would try to make a move.


But see god's move....
That day was same someday
I was lying on a stack of woods,
whole life had come to an end..
whole life had come to an end.................
just waiting for you,thinking for you,living for you,craving for you


The moment I ever wanted had come,
But had to watch it as none,
My soul would still be glad...
As i lived my life after my death/////////


just waiting for you....................




ASPIRING FINDER

PARTH SANGHANI

8 comments:

  1. Great work bro. 'Love' your efforts. :)

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  2. A very nice and touching poem, the best one on your blog. I can't help but wonder if it has been inspired just by a random love story that you read, or by a special someone?! :P it seems like it has been written for some specific person! if that's how it is, hope your story has a happy ending! God bless. :)

    oh,and by the way,as it happens to be your birthday, Happy Birthday! :)

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    1. Thanx a ton... and nopes its not been inspired ..just a state of mind...not specifically for any1...by the way thanx a ton :>..
      and whz diz... Do I really know u ??

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    2. Nah..Not really.Just came across your blog n well, liked your work! In fact, I've started looking forward to your posts! Anyway, if you don't mind me saying this, I'd become a fan of yours if only you'd work a little on your grammar.I mean your emotions are conveyed beautifully, just work a bit on your English! No offence intended, just a piece of advice!

      Guess this makes me your critic-fan! :)

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    3. Thanx,for showing such enthusiasm and zeal to my work. :) .
      I am really obliged by your honest reply and showing me the flaws.
      I really dont read my post again at the very moment when I post it.

      If you really loved my work then the comment means a lot to me. I just hope that critics like you forces me to work better.:) :) [do find the mistakes and inform me through mail or any other source :D :P :D :), I would be thankful.]


      PS: am just wondering, from where u got my birth-date?:P

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    4. Hi, Aspiring Finder.. :)
      I really do,so it will be my pleasure; just drop in your mail id or something!

      (In reply to the PS:)Nothing much to wonder about it, since you had linked your Facebook to the blog. Which apparently doesn't exist anymore! Wonder why?

      PS:Now ain't that something to wonder about?! ;)

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  3. Note down my mail ID : parthsanghani74@gmail.com

    FB story is whole another good story, btw this anonymous thing is creating enigma :)

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